Writing

Some of us finished writing our draft poems about our favourite places. We added sentences about what we can hear, smell, feel and taste in our favourite place at school. 

When we were done we took turns to read our poems to our friends and they gave us some feedback about our work. 

When Lola read her poem we were impressed by her sentence, "I see grassy-green trees." We would like to add some 'wow' words like that to our poems tomorrow!